Subject: Re: [FFML] Writing Skills
From: oneshot@ascensionet.com (OneShot)
Date: 6/6/1997, 1:58 PM
To: SlayerNext@aol.com
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com
Reply-to:
oneshot@ascensionet.com

On Fri, 6 Jun 1997 08:10:41 -0400 (EDT), you wrote:

<humor>

Tsunam, I've got good news and bad news.  First the bad news:  Your writing
style is so horrible it's criminal.  The good news is that it's Mihoshi who's

Ya mean with those numbers right ;)

serving the arrest warrant.

</humor>

Seriously though, the reason I CCed this to the FFML is that I know someone
here is going to look at Mihoshi serving the warrant, look at some of the
downright blatently criminal activities going on in other animes, and come up
with a story.

Infact lets make this a contest.  Mihoshi (and Kiyone if you know her) have
to arrest Happosai for panty thief.  Any takers?  [Place Evil Grin Here]

That'd be great. Jus' imagine it.

Mihoshi:Um..excuse me(Pokes Happosei on his back)Are you Mr. Happousei

Happousei:(Eyes-buggy)Why yes I am, sweetie.

Mihoshi:(Looks at notepad)I'm here to....arrest you for panty thief. You're a
wanted criminal and I have to take you in for questioning.(Produces
handcuffs)Can you please put these on for me. I have trouble working them.

Happousei:I'll put them on if you put these on(Produces a bra)


The winner gets our respect, admeration, and a free meal at Ucchan's.

What about the Nekohanten...all those Shampoo lovers would feel like they got
jypped ;)



-OneShot
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