Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF][G13][LAME] Making a Living
From: Mike Loader
Date: 6/6/1997, 2:39 PM
To: Raphael See
CC: Fan FictionML <fanfic@fanfic.com>

Sadly enough, it makes perfect sense. o.o;;;;; 

Nicely written, good action scenes. Just one quibble -

       Inside the room, Takaya was beginning to show a battery of graphs
showing the growing share of world wealth Mesekku Enterprises had
garnered in the past quarter. "We can see here that only the UN itself
has more influence than we do, and we're rapidly catching up with our
competition..."

The UN doesn't _have_ any influence. "Stop that!" "Why?" "Um, we're the
UN?" "That's nice. No. Whatcha gonna do about it?" "Um... pass a motion of
censure?"

- Mike Loader
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Fnord.