C&C for Flashman's DRAGON MOON 1/2

I can see all sorts of comic potential in this one... Not that the
concept itself isn't hilarious! ^_- I didn't think that I would read this
one through to the end (since I usually skim n-e-wayz), but I was so
intrigued by this triple x-over -- I like it!

Question #1:
Why is it that Gohan calls his father "Pop"? Or, considering where it's
translated from - "oyaji"? From what I've seen of DBZ, he usually says
"Otousan", which is more respectful. Or has Gohan lost a lot of that
respect after taking the Jusenkyou plunge?

Question #2:
I remember somewhere a reference about Akane and Usagi talking about
their classmates... WHAT classmates? Isn't Usagi in junior high? Or is it
that Crossover Dimension Device(tm) that suddenly aged her so that she'd
be able to enroll in Fuurinkan?

of light, the red head was a blond.  The panda looked at the girl for 
a second before it let out a roar of its own and the black hair that 
was on it became blond as well.  

You might want to reconsider the phrasing of how they charge up. "Became
blond" sounds like the reaction of someone who's discovered that Dennis
Rodman bleached his hair again.

    "Usagi!"

    No answer.

    "Usagi?  Now where could that girl have gotten to?"

Usagi TENDO?  *_*  (=>But then, perhaps you were aiming for that
particular reaction, no?)

OK!  That's it.  I can't keep this up anymore.  Do you want me to 
continue this or not?

I'd like to see more of this. ^_^  For some reason, Sailor Moon is
suddenly something that I'm obsessed about (Maybe because UPN has started
playing the episodes again), and DBZ and Ranma 1/2 were always my
favorites. 

Since Akane, Usagi, and Gohan are representin' their different series -
perhaps you're going to tackle the love triangle approach?  It may be a
cop-out to designate a couple, especially at this stage of the fic, so
I'm wondering what you're planning on putting these 3 through. Also, are
you going to follow with using the basic Ranma 1/2 storyline?


Nangke