Subject: Re: [FFML] [Dark] Keener's Final Embrace -- ALTERNATE ENDING
From: Bob Schroeck
Date: 6/5/1997, 10:16 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

How about this?  That appendum turned a story I didn't save into one I
wish I'd kept...  as it is, I'm keeping this, as there's enough context
that it almost stands on its own...
	Hmmmmmm, apparently the public consensus is to not so much toss the fic
out as to give it to a "REAl" fic writer. Sigh, if that's the case the
[snip] 
	Sorry I couldn't meet your standards Bob...

Hey, hey, it's nothing like that.  It was more that it was a vignette with
little explanation, although much was implied.  I like my fics with a
little more meat on them, unless they have an interesting twist or they're
just gonzo.  The double-level twist -- it's not Akane, and who a favorite
character *really* is -- added that for me.  And it was the *combination*
that worked for me, not the followup on its own -- see my original comment
above.  

-- Bob