| Subject: Re: [FFML] [Dark] Keener's Final Embrace -- ALTERNATE ENDING |
| From: Bob Schroeck |
| Date: 6/5/1997, 7:07 PM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
That was a nice uplifting story! But what it needs is a real shock ending. Like this one: Told you so. ___________________________________________ Sorry, Keener. This was just my way of saying, "I'M @#$%#$ TIRED OF IT ALWAYS BEING AKANE!!!" Comments welcome; flames will be laughed off.
How about this? That appendum turned a story I didn't save into one I wish I'd kept... as it is, I'm keeping this, as there's enough context that it almost stands on its own... -- Bob