Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C]The Nameless Sequel, Episodes 1&2
From: Mike Loader
Date: 6/4/1997, 5:04 PM
To: Keener
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

On Wed, 4 Jun 1997, Keener wrote: 
<snip something to wash a CERTAIN other script fic's bad taste from my
mouth>

	EXCELLENT! I'm throughly amazed that a fic written in script could be
this entertaining, this detailed and this funny!

Script fics have a long tradition of humor... John Biles' Putting Your
Heart in the Right Place being one of the more famous examples.

I only wish my
nitpicking skills weren't so incredibly lax so I could give you more
worthwile C&C. Characters are right on top of where they should be,
given the current storyline, and tired old cliche's are not only avoided
but used for more humor. And even the "cliched fic parody" cliche is
being avoided! Incredible...and funny. I'll even forgive you for that
Ukyo crack (at least in my fic she DOES make it out alive) in your
trailer.  

*chuckle* I have to be nice to Ukyo, otherwise certain prereaders
*coughZencough* would do unpleasant things to me.

	The only flaws and requests I have are... a slight OOC on Ranma's part
where he threatened Nabiki (though the resolution was done bueatifully)

Admitted. That scene has caused a lot of problems... while writing it, I
addcidentaly slipped into darkfic mode. The result, while rather good, did
_not_ fit Nameless's tone - to I converted it to story format and posted
it as a separate fic, then rewrote the scene for Nameless.

One too many mentions of the Damned Cat. A more egsagerated german
accent on the estranded doctor (not to much though, I hate to not be
able to understand him) An explination on Kasumi's pork fetish. And I'd
like to know where the Old Ghoul is during all this.  

Kas's pork thing is a aftereffect of the kill-P-chan bit in VC. Cologne,
we assume, is in the Nekohanten. Not sure about the doc.

Thanks for the comments. :) NS 3&4 will be out late tonight.