Draxon is ROLLING ON THE FLOOR LAUGHING OUT LOUD.

Wanna know why?

Draxon (I refuse to say, "I") just looked over what he had posted to the list, 
and then realized just how comical ADD chapter 8 is in it's current form!  
Save for maybe BGC: Warhammer, that is the worst thing he has posted to the 
list - and he was blissfully unaware of just how raw that chapter was when he 
posted it!

Draxon looked over it and read such comical scenes as:

Talarath was busy strangling Ryouga and didn't notice Apsu's call.

"She's right here."  Just as Ranma recognized Talarath's voice, Akane slammed 
into her, knocking her back again.  Ranma cushioned her fall and rolled her to 
the side.  "You ok?"  She asked quickly.
(It took Draxon a few minutes to figure out which 'her' he had been trying to 
write about earlier)

Apsu fired his 10th consecutive hadoken strike into the stomach of Talarath 
when Talarath grabbed his head and slammed it into the wall beside him.  He 
screamed and thrust his hands upward, knocking Talarath's hand away.  He then 
roared savagely and hit Talarath with another hadoken attack.
(Read this one rather quickly and with a matter-of-fact tone)

He stepped back when one of the figures slammed into him in mid-flight.  He 
was knocked against a rock wall but quickly began pounding the figure.
(How's that for descriptive quality?)
And Draxon must include the following paragraph to complete his dishonor.
"I don't know..."  Akane said, "But I think it is a bad sign.  Let me see what 
I can do..."  She tugged hard at the bonds, and was surprised when she 
backhanded herself in the face.  Michelle giggled but was silenced by a glare 
from Akane.
Okay, Draxon could keep going on and on for a few hours just from chapter 8.  
Seriously - I'd like to apologize for putting something out there that is 
so... RAW.  At this point C&C'ers wouldn't be able to note all of my errors, 
so if you haven't started on ADD8 please wait until I get a version that is 
suitable for public viewing.  I think I had worked on it for so long that my 
brain was fried, and all I could think was 
"Demon...delight...post...FFML...Food...Clothing..Se-" (Quote edited for 
content)
I promise that the next version I put out there won't be nearly as sad as this 
one.

Draxon-X@msn.com (Who is wondering if he should shoot himself at this very 
moment.)