I'll say more when I go back and manage to read the whole story, but there
was just this little thing I thought I should mention:

Louis-Phillipe Giroux wrote:

Linguistic Notes:

Baka compound terms borrowed from Narrabundah 1/2 by Ratbat with his permission

                                                                  ^^^

[Bats eyelashes while baring fangs.]
Ahem!
Onna desuwa!
 :)

Urac 'Ratbat' Sigma, the moral: never assume after someone who plays a
gender-bender in their own fic...

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