Just some thoughts, especially for the new writers on the list,
but I'm sure the more experienced members will be able to add their own
wisdom... I'll be using Ranma 1/2 as the example, since it's more or
less our lingua franca, but much of this should be generally applicable.
There are three main classes of new characters that appear in
fanfics.
1. Villain of the Week. A new antagonist for our hero(es) to
fight. While as the name implies most of these are one-shot characters,
in more campaign-oriented series such as Sailor Moon the new baddies can
cover an entire series of stories. An example off the top of my head:
the Ace of Hearts, from the "Ace of Hearts" story.
2. Co-Protagonist. A character who is effectively "co-starring"
in the story with the Ranma characters. Often these are stand-ins for
the author (and friends) or a favorite character from the author's
original work. Example: Twister, from "Twisted Path".
3. New supporting cast. Just about everyone else. Often
created to fill a niche ("I wonder why we never see a police officer in
Nerima?") or as adjuncts to the first two types. Note that VOTW and CPs
can be moved into this category if they stick around after their main
storyline is completed. Example: Just about every story has at least
one for a cameo.
Power/Skill Levels: Villains of the Week are almost invariably
more powerful/skilled than Ranma...or at least appear to be during the
first battle. Usually they have some sort of edge which the hero must
either eliminate or work to overcome. VOTW that are *really* more
powerful than the main character should either have a vital and
believable weakness, or provide some excuse for the heroes to team up on
him.
Co-Protagonists should generally be about the level of Ranma and
Ryouga, or have some special talent/power that allows her to keep up.
Note that the CP can be *considerably* less powerful/good at fighting if
the story is skewed away from combat. Something to keep in mind; Ranma
and Ryouga are as good as they are at fighting because they sacrificed
normal childhoods to get that way. A CP shouldn't be much better at the
martial arts unless they also didn't have much of a life other than
training.
Supporting cast of course can be at any power level necessary,
though they are generally less powerful than the main characters, or have
plot reasons for keeping themselves in the background. (For all we know,
Doc Toufuu could whip Ranma's butt six ways from Sunday, but he prefers
the quiet life of a simple bonesetter, thank you very much.)
Things To Do
1. Make a character biography sheet. This is especially
important for Co-Protagonists, but Villains of the Week will need it
too. (Especially as they may not get enough time on screen to fully
develop their personality.) Include a physical description, a basic
overview of her personality, important quirks and the events that spawned
them, combat style if any, and other things you'd ask about someone the
first time you met them. Then a few paragraphs describing the
character's life in chronological sequence up to her arrival in the story.
2. Determine baseline motives and reactions. Why is this person
in Nerima, and interacting with the Ranma characters? Who would they
react favorably to, unfavorably, just be boggled by? Ask yourself what
the most likely events are and how he'd deal with them.
3. Show the bio sheet to a friend. Get them to ask any
questions that come to mind, and write down the answers. Note any gut
reactions. If your friend says "this guy sounds like a complete SOB" and
you were attempting to make the character likable, you may want to modify
him a bit, or change his role in the story.
4. Write the story. now that you've put this much work into it,
you might as well get use out of your character.
Problems...
1. Excessive power levels. This is not so much a problem with
Villains of the Week as you can always give Ranma a quick one-time
equalizer if all else fails. Co-Protagonists are another story. Many
fans of Ranma prefer *him* to be the kick-butt hero, so having the CP
being able to wipe the floor with him doesn't sit well. Besides, if the
CP is able to wipe the floor with the toughest regular Ranma cast, then
new foes have to be introduced just for her, which makes the regular cast
kind of redundant, which leads to...
2. "Too cool for this series". This happens when the new
characters have basically taken over the story and the Ranma cast is
relegated to spectators or the butt of jokes. If the word "Ranma" can
be replaced by the word "John" without changing the sense of the story,
you've gone too far.
3. Bunching. Introducing too many new characters too fast can
leave the reader confused and disinterested. It's tempting to introduce
the new Co-Protagonist, his arch-enemy, their love interests, trainers
and odd relatives all in one slew. But it's better to let them trickle
in one or two at a time, with whole chapters between introductions to
develop the characters you already have.
4. Same old, same old. This is most noticable with Villains of
the Week. Takahashi-sensei and the anime writers did a terrific job of
providing lots of VOTW for Ranma to fight; it takes some doing to come up
with one that's different enough to hold interest. Take some time to
find an original twist or two; perhaps *this* VOTW is really after Kumon
Ryuu, but is attacking Ranma because Kumon was using that name when the
villain met him.
And connecting new characters with less-overused regular cast
members helps too. ("Gee, Gos, I didn't know you had a cousin. What
gives with the spooky makeup?")
Hope this has been of some help....
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