I liked this, but it left several unansered questions:;
Was Nodolka a demon Hunter or just from a famil;y of them?
Can Ranma become a Demon Hunter?  It seems to be hereditary
  These might have been answered in part one but I haven't 
seen it. Over all I think we have a winner here but it 
needs some polishing. I loverd seeing Ranma tell everybody 
off adn carry Akane to the roof to explain things! I would 
like to see more of that seen and more of the fights with 
his mom. the fight in dojo wasn't bad but iI think more 
detail there would have helped also.

Rick
rik@cfanet.com
P.S. If the autor or someone would send a copy of part one 
or an address where I can find it. It would help. Thanks
Rick
rik@cfanet.com