I Caught one serious problem in this fic. When Happosai 
gives the cure to Ranma, there is no apparent reason for 
him to have changed his mind. I think it would be a good 
idea to have some explanation of what happened.
  Apart from this I thought this was a really neat fic.

E Robinson
rik@cfanet.com

P.S. It is Saturday the 24th of May, is the the FFML down? 
I was bounced because of mail problems with my server 
earlier today, but I can't seem to get back on now they are 
fixed.