On Wed, 21 May 1997, Monica/Akira-chan wrote:

<*>A poem inspired by Zetsuai/Bronze and suffering bishonen-lovers in general...

*^^* Saw my name in it so..

<*>Wing to Darkness: By Monica Shin

Er.. no title for my version. Hope this isn't 
too strong of an infringement, Monica. ^_^;; 
A hobby of mine to "twist" things. ;)

---
Wing of Darkness
{inspired by Monica's Wing to Darkness}
---

You were my
Ideal
Love
Shit.
You crush my
Heart
Soul
Sanity.

and

Now
You aren't

I lied to you
Never holding on.

You aren't
Mine.
Now and
Forever
Another's.

Pity
Revulsion.
Sends
chains
of
My heart
through
Your soul.

I promise you

except
You stay.

Boasting
a
Facade
Darkness
Distortion
Of all that you are.

Staying with your
Now-seducer.
I dare not touch.
I remain
In the cold.

I
Want
Your soul
Within
My arms.

With the Dark
I let you
Slip away.
I fear.

On Wings
Angels
Fly
>From the Night
You go.

Eyes lost
You cannot 
Smile
And You
Cannot move.

You once
said
You loved me.
But
You lied.

And
I wander
Through
Darkness
Enveloping
Night.

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Hope it wasn't too bad. :p Need more practice.
Sorry, Monica. ^_^;; 

Wing.



<*>
<*>You are my
<*>Ideal
<*>Love 
<*>God. 
<*>You hold my
<*>Heart
<*>Soul
<*>Sanity.
<*>
<*>and
<*>
<*>Now
<*>You are
<*>
<*>I promised you
<*>Never let you go.
<*>
<*>You are
<*>Mine.
<*>Only
<*>Forever
<*>Mine.
<*>
<*>Obsession
<*>Compulsion.
<*>Chains 
<*>Bonds 
<*>of
<*>My heart
<*>to
<*>Your soul.
<*>
<*>I promised you
<*>
<*>Except
<*>You leave.
<*>
<*>Barely 
<*>an
<*>Image
<*>Shadow
<*>Memory
<*>Of all that you were.
<*>
<*>Leaving with your
<*>Now-lover.
<*>I cannot touch.
<*>I follow
<*>In the cold.
<*>
<*>I
<*>Want
<*>Your arms
<*>Around
<*>My soul.
<*>
<*>In the dark
<*>I watch you
<*>Slip away.
<*>I know.
<*>
<*>On wings 
<*>Angels
<*>Fly 
<*>To the Night
<*>You go.
<*>
<*>Eyes open,
<*>You try to 
<*>Smile
<*>But you 
<*>Cannot move.
<*>
<*>You try
<*>To say
<*>You love me.
<*>But
<*>You die.
<*>
<*>And
<*>I follow
<*>Into
<*>Dark
<*>Velvet
<*>Night.
<*>-----
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<*>
<*>


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