First off, I'm going to grumble a bit, since someone put out a 
rapefic with Ryouga as the accused before I got mine ready to go out, 
and I started mine in January. Now it's going to look like a  copycat 
idea...oh well.

Now, for the C&C on the rapefic. 

First off: Author's Notes containing technical spoilers for the 
fanfic itself do NOT belong at the beginning of the story. It kind of 
makes it a little disappointing. 

Next item: There is some serious mischaracterization here. I'm 
talking Ranma and Shampoo.
While Ranma starts off okay, there is *no* *way* Ranma would pull 
that "kiss" act on Ryouga-chan. 
Shampoo's problem: To be honest, I don't think Shampoo would *CARE* 
if someone raped Akane. I believe the purple-haired Amazon would say 
something along the lines of: "If violent tomboy not strong enough to 
keep from be attack, it no concern of Shampoo." She'd also say, 
"Ranma see Akane no make good wife, is not strong! Forget violent 
weak tomboy and go back China with Shampoo!"

Now, on to other matters...

As I mentioned earlier, I am working on a rapefic of my own. Because 
it's set in one of the "what-if" continuation timelines, and the 
timeline it exists in is not specific yet, I'd like to know if any of 
the continuation series authors out there would be interested in 
having a VERY dark sidestory to their series.

The specifics:
-Akane and Ranma have confessed their love
-Ryouga and Ukyou are a couple of sorts
-Everyone's curse is normal (i.e. from the manga)
-Ranma-chan *IS* raped
-The prime suspect is Ryouga
-Ryouga didn't do it, and they do find out who did, and why

I am hoping perhaps that Marisa Price or RpM would be interested in 
this rapefic as a side-story. If not, I'll write it to stand on its 
own. 



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