Hi!  I just posted "Polyandry", a R 1/2 fanfic that has nothing to do with 
my earlier two, and I can't get the tone right.  If anyone can help me add 
stuff to make it more sentimental or whatever (basically to dilute the 
"Veritas" similarities), I'd really appreciate it.  Especially if you read 
Judy Blume's stuff, the Babysitters Club or Sweet Valley Twins series, etc. 
from about seven years ago because that's the tone I'm going for in the middle.