On Fri, 16 May 1997 19:46:37 -0400 "Tempest" <Omicron@sprynet.com>
writes:

Well...against my better judgement...I am going to send out Chapter

one

of the story without my reader going over it first.  M.K.Kiyone did

go

over part of it...but not all of it...*sheepish grin* .    I will

welcom

C&C, especially since this is my first story posted...ever.  (much
different than posting poetry..this  to HAS to make sense.

Well Here goes somethin!

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	Star Wars/ Tenchi fusion
	No need for Skywalker
	Star Wars:
	Episode Pi
	A False Hope

	Well, I say it is an interesting adaptation of the Star Wars
Universe, as well as the Tenchi World.  I guess though... I thought
you were going to do a more serious 'fic.  I mean, you can do your
humor, but perhaps you could find a more realistic way of approaching
it.
	Of course, I love Star Wars, I've read all the books published 
by
Bantam Spectra (Three Cheers for Timothy Zahn!!!!) and I figured your
'fic would be just like the ones I'd read.
	Thats just my opinion, you'll probably send my mail to the 
Recycle
Bin from now on...

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Actually Tempest...I haven't been able to read any of the books and any
input is valuable input.  
Anyway...This is based off the movie, but I will be doing it in a mildly
humurous way.  Nothing extremely funny...well as it stands, but 
I will be bringing this to a serious level.  I am using the tenchi
characters to twist the story and, yes, to add a wee spot of humour to
it.

If you have any ideas, feel free to send them to me.  I am doing a
re-write of the first chapter...was going to have it done tonite (Fri
EST) but
things keep coming up.  Hopefully I will have it posted by Mon afternoon
and I am trying to get chapter two done by Wed night...(we all know what
happens to 
stories procrastinators write...they are almost _ALWAYS_ late...teehee).

Feel free to give me any opinions you have because C&C helps me write a
story that is appealing to the majority.


thanx