Well...against my better judgement...I am going to send out Chapter

one

of the story without my reader going over it first.  M.K.Kiyone did

go

over part of it...but not all of it...*sheepish grin* .    I will

welcom

C&C, especially since this is my first story posted...ever.  (much
different than posting poetry..this  to HAS to make sense.

Well Here goes somethin!

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	Star Wars/ Tenchi fusion
	No need for Skywalker
	Star Wars:
	Episode Pi
	A False Hope

	Well, I say it is an interesting adaptation of the Star Wars
Universe, as well as the Tenchi World.  I guess though... I thought
you were going to do a more serious 'fic.  I mean, you can do your
humor, but perhaps you could find a more realistic way of approaching
it.
	Of course, I love Star Wars, I've read all the books published by
Bantam Spectra (Three Cheers for Timothy Zahn!!!!) and I figured your
'fic would be just like the ones I'd read.
	Thats just my opinion, you'll probably send my mail to the Recycle
Bin from now on...

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