Okaaaayyyyyy.... Dark, alot of tension, but very soap operish. It's a
good idea, though a bit extreme...write a teaser, let's see whathappens.
Xeth
On Wed, 14 May 1997 karmin.stjean@the-spa.com wrote:
I had this idea for a Ryoga tale but so far all that's come to me is the basic
outline:
1. Ryoga is mistakenly accused of raping Akane when she's found comatose and
naked and bound with a bandanna.
2. The others are so angry at what happened to Akane that they drag Ryoga to
Jusenkyo and throw him into Pool of Drowned Girl, removng his pig-curse and
giving him the girl-curse, then rape him as an act of revenge. (Note: Ryoga
gets pregnant.)
3. Ryoga is found to be innocent after all, but not until Akane finally wakes
up seven months later.
4. Ryoga dies in childbirth.
Suggestions are very welcome.
Xeth, the imaginative dragon in a hooman body...
*Insert quotable insite here*
email me at xeth@vaga.flame.org or cmhemphi@unity.ncsu.edu
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"Admiral Kyone," shouts an officer on duty, "there is a lifepod ejecting
from the rebel ship!"
"Life forms?"
"Non Admiral. Shall we destroy it?"
"Only if Darth Mihoshi was on board...," Kyone whispers to herself.
Anata no tamashii wa watashi no desu yo. Itedakimasu.