karmin.stjean@the-spa.com wrote:

<snip one of the FEW fics even KEENER won't do!!!>

	One thing you seem to be missing is an accurate portrayal of Ryouga in
this one. His beloved Akane hurt? And by some bastard that's OBVIOUSLY
mocking him? The Universe isn't big enough for that guy to hide in. 
	Ryouga's reaction would make a perfect Shi Shi Hokodan, hell a Jisatsu
Youkouro (Suicide Blast Furnace) look like a...a... (I'm blanking here
people, what's something pathetically inadequate, other then my
vocabulary?) 

(I'm a naughty fanfic writer, a naughty fanfic writer!)  
      /  
 Oo
(~, )
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	But not THAT naughty!!!