I located a couple of typos . . .
- The drink from Ukyou's father's 'recipe' was in a bottle made of 'glue'
glass?
- Ranma and Miyabi sparring: 'her father's reluctance to hit him wasn't
helping her relax' - huh? Who's there besides the two of them, or did
Miyabi change gender briefly?
- Same scene, after Kunou departs via Ranma Air: Miyabi - 'Why haven't you
told yet?' - Insert a 'him' in there
- End of the dinnertime battle: It says 'Nodoka' stirs and starts to wake
up, when it should be Miyabi.
Also, general note: Shampoo's hair is purple, not blue, but someone refers
to her as the blue-haired Amazon?
Tim Miller
trmiller@mail.bcpl.lib.md.us