Subject: Re: act 4, final?
From: Shachihoko
Date: 5/12/1997, 9:30 AM
To: RPM - acct 3/5
CC: megafic writers -- Christopher Willmore <4cw6@qlink.queensu.ca>, Kevin Eav <geist@holly.colostate.edu>, Kun-chan <kunoichi@yoyo.cc.monash.edu.au>, "Mike W. Loader" <mike@thekeep.org>, Ross McKenzie <rmckenzi@euclid.ucsd.edu>, fanfic list <fanfic@fanfic.com>

I located a couple of typos . . . 

- The drink from Ukyou's father's 'recipe' was in a bottle made of 'glue'
glass?

- Ranma and Miyabi sparring: 'her father's reluctance to hit him wasn't
helping her relax' - huh? Who's there besides the two of them, or did
Miyabi change gender briefly?
- Same scene, after Kunou departs via Ranma Air: Miyabi - 'Why haven't you
told yet?' - Insert a 'him' in there

- End of the dinnertime battle: It says 'Nodoka' stirs and starts to wake
up, when it should be Miyabi.

Also, general note: Shampoo's hair is purple, not blue, but someone refers
to her as the blue-haired Amazon?

				Tim Miller
					trmiller@mail.bcpl.lib.md.us