Subject: Re: [FFML] "Top Ten Rejected Plots for a Ranma 1/2 Lemon Fanfic"
From: JD Farber
Date: 5/12/1997, 1:38 AM
To: fcasper
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

4. Akane finds herself without a fiancee after she mallets Ranma once
too often for imagined lechery.  Ashamed of the way she acted and filled
with sorrow over the loss of Ranma, Akane decides to give her body to
any male who wants her, thus becoming the hentai she always accused
Ranma of being, to punish herself.

This isn't a bad idea, actually.  It could go something like this.

Akane kills Ranma accidentally.

Akane realizes that Ranma loved her, and all of her accusations were false.

Akane falls into a great bout of depression.

Akane tries to kill herself, but fails/can't.

Akane starts hearing her own voice shouting 'Pervert' and such.

Akane starts whoring herself out, using the money for drugs to try and
forget her pain.

>From here, it could go one of two ways: Redemption, or Destruction.

Redemption: Ryoga finds her, but Akane is so coked up, she doesn't recognize
him.  He carries her off to someplace private, and dries her out.  He hears
her tale, and they talk.  Touchy feely crap abounds, and Akane finds
salvation in Ryoga.

Destruction: I'll skip right to the end.  Akane dies cold and alone, in a
gutter somewhere.  If you really want to be malicious and cruel, you could
have a scene in the afterlife with her meeting Ranma, and Akane shouts "I
love you Ranma and now we can be together forever!!"  To wit Ranma replies
"The Akane I fell in love with wouldn't have died a diseased, coked-up
whore.  I love Akane.  I don't know who you are."  And Ranma walks off.
Final scene of Akane collapsing in tears, curling up into a ball.  Fade to
black.

This is obviously more of a darkfic then a lemon, but it might be a fun
read.  (Yes, a fun read.  I like darkfics.  I liked 'Paint it Black'.  It's
fun to see these characters twisted and evil.)

And to think that I actually like Akane.  If I could plot this out for
someone that I like, just imagine what I could do to Shampoo!  At any rate,
I just outlined the story for someone.  Go write it!

JD
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