Yes, this is a fairly dark fic.  Not a darkfic yet, but I have
the feeling that it's going to come close.  Go with your instincts,
man, do the daring deeds.  

I can tell where the change from Original Flavor to Independent
Series started, too.  It was when Nodoka started musing to herself
on the way home from the train station.  Somehow, the feeling doesn't
mesh with the first part of the story.

I see you've decided to go with the "Crazy Nodoka" characterization
that seems to be so popular these days.  I predict you're going to 
have a fight on your hands with this one.  Personally, I think that
her justification for engaging Ranma to Yohko is a little weak.
You might want to work on it.


Foxtrot the Furryous, CBTFH, ret