| Subject: Re: [FFML] [ffml][fanfic][ranma/yohko] A Ranma 1/2 - Demon Hunter Yohko Crossover |
| From: "David M. Lerman" <mdlerma2@gsbmba2.uchicago.edu> |
| Date: 5/12/1997, 6:40 PM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
I have two problems with this story. First, since Nodoka admitted that
Yohko and Ranma were not engaged as children, on what grounds can she
dissolve the other engagement? Second, I see Ranma's reaction as
very OOC. He respects his mother, and I can't see him using vulgarities
with her. I do think that he would politely demand to know why family
honor required him to marry Yohko.
dml