On 5/10/97 12:00 PM, Richard Lawson at sterman@sprynet.com wrote:

As to the story itself:  I'm not sure I should have written it.  
At first I was all fired up.  It started with a discussion I had 
with my prereaders over Minmei, the computer in Nouma's apartment.  
Ty Hamilton's excellent "Bottleneck" was also an inspiration.  I 
began writing this with a lot of enthusiasm.  As I got further 
into the story, I began to wonder if this wasn't a bad idea - that 
perhaps I should leave well enough alone with "Transitions".

Anyway, I want your feedback.  Did you like it?  Should it be 
added to my stories about Nuku Nuku, or should I leave the cycle 
complete as it is?

Hmmm. I suppose my emotions in this are rather similar to Ryu's. :) I did 
like it, though it also bothered me some. Probably most of my problems 
with it came from when I thought you were going to try and resurrect 
Atusko; I was really glad when you didn't. :) Letting her grow up in her 
own way was a redemption, in many ways. 



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