Ok, it's been a few, but I have been stuck on the second part of Wolf
in the Dojo, so haven't been reading much, but here we go again!

	First, 'Yin, Yang, and Yohko' by Kmagami@hsonline.net.  An interesting
start, but the story is using a LOT of cliches from Ranma to set things
up.  I am interested in seeing how this one progresses, but of course,
if the cliches continue, I may just throw in my Ranma tapes and imagine
Yohko in the scenes.

	Next, 'The Uses of a Knife' by otakunxs@bellsouth.net.  Hmmmmmm...  Not
to bad with this one.  Definately one to read.  Really isn't a sadfic,
the author is right.  Good representation of the knife as well.  I think
I can safely say that I recommend this one.

	Lastly, 'The Ranmariad' by whomever's web page i got this one off of. 
Ok Skippy, there are three things I can think of that you are going to
have to take care of.  Genma as Belgarath is Ok, Nodoka should be
Poldera, I think Kasumi should be Polgara.  In your intro, you have
Nodoka as both wife and daughter.  Second, Genma taking Ranma from
(Polgara) for so long goes against one of the underlying basis for the
Garion moral decisions.  Garion's life was Polgara, and Polgara's life
was Garion.  There has to be a better way to get Ranma to learn the arts
or cursed, if you're gonna use that.  I think the Will and the Word
would be better for the change Ranma undergoes.  Lastly, you really need
to work on length of explainations.  There were a lot of times I would
reread parts trying to see if I missed something, just to find out it
wasn't there.  You mentioned prereaders.  If you want, I think I might
be interested.

	Ok, that's it for now.  If I ever get over the writer's block on part
two of Wolf in the Dojo, I'll post it.  As for now, Peace, Tranquility,
and Lots and Lots of Ammo!
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