Ok time for the flaming wips.

well not quite but, we can make beleive anyway.

First off great story, I've said it once and i will say it many more
times if nessesary.

The ending was very troubling, I mean that you give us a great
cliffhanger ending, but it's JUST NOT FAIR.  expecialy with the three 
months you will be gone. sure you have offered to make a page for the 
spoilers to you fic for those who just can't wait, but this will drive 
some people their just to try and find out a little more.

I know this will sound bad, excpecialy sence i haven't writen much of 
myself, but after that last part I would have went into a writing spree. 
If just to post another part to end it on a less exiting point of the 
story.

also when the scouts transformed in front of Ranma you used Star Power
once again. oh well not to bad.

Wow Usagi actualy had a plan, and it worked! amazing, and she came up
with it all by herself.

Hey now that Ranma made the promis to Akane he might just be presusaded
to keep sailor terra around in case Hopposia or another monster comes
aound because they don't want to gather a lot of attention, but what if
Hopposia can tell that Ranma is sailor Terra, that would add an
interesting twist to things.

I can see now a sudden apperence of the outer senshi, including chibi
usa and 'puu', and maybe even Akane walking in on them still in their
senshi garb, including Ranma, and reconizing hime.

Just a few ideas.

Oh well, no if i could get the fic i am working on into a higher gear.

I just hope that this is not were you plan on leaving us for the three
month time.

  I see flaming in your future

keep up the great work

So much for C&C


I am not an otaku!!

the first sign of denial