On Fri, 9 May 1997 16:50:01 -0500 (CDT), Bridget Ellen Engman wrote:

Ranma 1/2 Reunion
Shampoo:  Feet of Clay, Kisses of Death

Very good... a very nasty take on Cologne's character, but one that works for
your story. My one suggestion: Mousse, I think, changed his behavior a little
too easily. It's fine for him to do what he did, but it must have been terribly
hard for him to turn against Shampoo, and I'd like to see this shown a little
more.

I'm not totally convinced that that wasn't just a duck at the end, BTW...

Gary Kleppe
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