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In a message dated 97-05-06 22:22:11 EDT, you write:

<< Ranma/Xfactor crossover
 This is interesting; I think the two milieux are mingling well, and 
I'm

eager to see more of X-Factor reach Nerima, or more Ranma cast go to

 Washington, whichever (if either) you have in mind.
  I suggest slowing down, offering more physical description when a lot
 of characters, or unfamiliar ones like the main villains, are in a
 scene.

Although I'm a Peter David fan, I only read Hulk, so I don't know that

 much about X-Factor; but is their HQ so flimsy that knocking out only
 one wire can sabotage their phone system? I would think a government
 organization would have cellular and satellite phones, radios, etc., 
so

in part 2, Jamie should have other ways to contact them. Couldn't he

 also call someone he knows in the area to carry a message to HQ? Or 
call

another government agency? Perhaps I misunderstood the nature of the

 sabotage done. >>

Actually, yes.  Their HQ is that flimsy.  I remember a particularly 
funny issue where Val had had a Danger Room built for the team.  The 
only problem was they couldn't get into it because the doornob fell 
off.

I'm betting that there has been some dimensional shifting done.  Mr. 

Maddox
is now in a seperate reality.

Jamie Madrox is in the same reality.  He just isn't having any luck 
contacting home.

ThanX for your comments!

Sariah DeGidio
Ryouga-chan

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