In a message dated 97-05-06 22:22:11 EDT, you write:
<< Ranma/Xfactor crossover
This is interesting; I think the two milieux are mingling well, and I'm
eager to see more of X-Factor reach Nerima, or more Ranma cast go to
Washington, whichever (if either) you have in mind.
I suggest slowing down, offering more physical description when a lot
of characters, or unfamiliar ones like the main villains, are in a
scene.
Although I'm a Peter David fan, I only read Hulk, so I don't know that
much about X-Factor; but is their HQ so flimsy that knocking out only
one wire can sabotage their phone system? I would think a government
organization would have cellular and satellite phones, radios, etc., so
in part 2, Jamie should have other ways to contact them. Couldn't he
also call someone he knows in the area to carry a message to HQ? Or call
another government agency? Perhaps I misunderstood the nature of the
sabotage done. >>
I'm betting that there has been some dimensional shifting done. Mr. Maddox
is now in a seperate reality.
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