On Wed, 7 May 1997, Gary Kleppe wrote:

I have to agree with you about this fic. I could deal with Akane's
portrayl in "Bitter End", because Zen gave us a reason for it (the
mental illness). Not so in this fic. She is just portrayed as some
ever-angry, totally shallow, and incredibly stupid caricature of herself
for no apparant reason.

  *Sigh.*  I gave reasons.  Perhaps in this case I should explain things
further, but to be truthful flaming me on the entire fanfic list is no way
complain.  Tell me *where*, tell me *why*, but don't flame the thing
without any explanation to everyone!  Geez people, please.  There is such
a thing called _constructive _ critisim, you know.  This is a work in
progress.