Subject: Re: [FFML] [FFML] [Fanfic] The final day
From: dlangley@elk-grove.k12.il.us (Dianne Langley)
Date: 5/5/1997, 3:36 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

As someone else pointed out, this is too short. As it stands it is
more of an outline than a completed fic.

Please remember that while Akane's bedroom is upstairs, the bath is
on the ground floor. Also I think it takes more that a few drops of
water to trigger the change.

You're off to a good start, I am looking forward to an expanded version.


Gee, this story was just going to let off a little depression I had, but if
you guys like it that much, I guess I will do an expanded rewrite!  Thanx
for the inspiration!

Mako