Subject: Re: [FFML] [FFML] [Fanfic] The final day
From: "Peggy A. Stonnell" <izzie@vcn.bc.ca>
Date: 5/5/1997, 9:15 AM
To: Anthony Woo
CC: Dianne Langley <dlangley@elk-grove.k12.il.us>, fanfic@fanfic.com

As someone else pointed out, this is too short. As it stands it is 
more of an outline than a completed fic.

Please remember that while Akane's bedroom is upstairs, the bath is
on the ground floor. Also I think it takes more that a few drops of
water to trigger the change.

You're off to a good start, I am looking forward to an expanded version.

Peggy