| Subject: Re: [FFML] [FFML] [Fanfic] The final day |
| From: "Peggy A. Stonnell" <izzie@vcn.bc.ca> |
| Date: 5/5/1997, 9:15 AM |
| To: Anthony Woo |
| CC: Dianne Langley <dlangley@elk-grove.k12.il.us>, fanfic@fanfic.com |
As someone else pointed out, this is too short. As it stands it is more of an outline than a completed fic. Please remember that while Akane's bedroom is upstairs, the bath is on the ground floor. Also I think it takes more that a few drops of water to trigger the change. You're off to a good start, I am looking forward to an expanded version. Peggy