Ranma's brows furrowed at the unusual event. A board creaked behind
Ranma. It was a small warning, but it was enough. Ranma leaped up and
back, flipping in the air to land back on his feet at the very top of
the roof.
Get a Point Of View.
You aren't working in Anime or Manga. You're working in text.
You don't have animation, colors or even a single well-inked line, but
you do have the power to present the world colored by a person's
perceptions and judgement.
The advantage is that valuations (like: "small warning") aren't handed
down by "God", they're the result of somebody's biases.
Henry J. Cobb hcobb@slip.net http://www.io.com/~hcobb