Subject: Re: [FFML] [FFML][fanfic][ranma1/2]ColdFuture.P1
From: "Henry J. Cobb" <hcobb@slip.net>
Date: 4/30/1997, 10:28 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Ranma's brows furrowed at the unusual event.  A board creaked behind
Ranma.  It was a small warning, but it was enough.  Ranma leaped up and
back, flipping in the air to land back on his feet at the very top of
the roof.

Get a Point Of View.

You aren't working in Anime or Manga.  You're working in text.

You don't have animation, colors or even a single well-inked line, but
you do have the power to present the world colored by a person's
perceptions and judgement.

The advantage is that valuations (like: "small warning") aren't handed
down by "God", they're the result of somebody's biases.

	Henry J. Cobb	hcobb@slip.net          http://www.io.com/~hcobb