I thought I posted it to th ML, but it didn't show up, I don't think...
but since it's so annoying to remove all the html tags I placed in it,
I'll leave here a URL for those who want to see it...

http://www.escaflowne.ml.org/fanfic/fic1.html

If you could give me any type of constructive criticism, I'd really
appreciate it, since this is my first attempt at a fanfic (and it's a
series...)

Also, if you read it, and like it, and would like to continue it, please
let me know, since at this point I've messed up, and I no longer know what
I'm going to do with the plot...

Yours,

Ikari Shinji

Pilot: EVA-01
Member: NERV, Security Clearance: **Classified**
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Otherwise known as Kevin Shiue 
or, on Undernet #anime, #evangelion as I_Shinji

http://www.escaflowne.ml.org