Are you seriously going to end it like that? Here's a chance to

take a 

lemon and make it a very interesting story of Ranma's jealousy and

dark rage, 

which most people seem to ignore. I mean this has so many

possiblities that 

_I'd_ be tempted to take this story to a conclusion. What do we

have here? 

Akane was forced to betray Ranma by a drug introduced by Ukyou, his

best 

friend, and Shampoo. It involved Ryouga, his enemy, and deflowered

his love. I 

think I can see where it is going. Who does he forgive? Who does he

strike 

against? Does his original barriers reappear in regards to Akane? 
	This has many possiblities and I beg you to continue this. I think

many 

people will agree with me. C'mon. Do it. If not for everyone else,

then because 

I hate endings that leave me dangling at a climax with no follow up

or even a 

deneumonte. 

	Maybe thats the magic of the story.  Not what's said, but what's
implied.

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