Ranma pushed through the door of Ucchan's, his heart freezing as he
heard noises upstairs.  He got to the doorway of Ukyo's room in time to see
Akane throw her head back and call Ryoga's name.  Ranma stood frozen with
horror, the image of the two of them together etching itself irrevocably
into his memory.  Sick with rage, he silently backed away and crept down
the stairs.  He stood at the bottom of the stairs, seeing nothing, his
mind's eye filled with that single image.  His heart burned with agony and
twisted with dark fury.
        "I...will have revenge..." Ranma whispered into the blackness.

	Are you seriously going to end it like that? Here's a chance to take a 
lemon and make it a very interesting story of Ranma's jealousy and dark rage, 
which most people seem to ignore. I mean this has so many possiblities that 
_I'd_ be tempted to take this story to a conclusion. What do we have here? 
Akane was forced to betray Ranma by a drug introduced by Ukyou, his best 
friend, and Shampoo. It involved Ryouga, his enemy, and deflowered his love. I 
think I can see where it is going. Who does he forgive? Who does he strike 
against? Does his original barriers reappear in regards to Akane? 
	This has many possiblities and I beg you to continue this. I think many 
people will agree with me. C'mon. Do it. If not for everyone else, then because 
I hate endings that leave me dangling at a climax with no follow up or even a 
deneumonte. 

	Joseph Kohle