Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic] (delta) Bubblegum Collision part 4 of 6 - The Enemy of My Enemy...
From: bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian Weinberg)
Date: 4/24/1997, 8:19 AM
To: Fanfiction ML

On Mon, 21 Apr 1997 14:07:44 -0500 Stormwalker wrote:

:      Among those benefitting from the heiress's generosity was a
: young officer of the AD Police by the name of Nene Romanova.  She
: was surprised when she received an envelope from Miss Stevenson's
: lawyers, and would be even more surprised later when she opened
: it.  The contents included some legal documents and a short
: letter.
: 
:      Miss Romanova,
:      I am truly sorry for the pain that I have caused you.  If
: you have received this, it is likely that I will never be able to
: convey my apology in person, so please accept this means as the
: best which I may offer.  I realize that this is a small
: compensation for your pain, but it is the best that I can give.

A very nice touch.  Am I forgetful or are you missing an
explanation how she found out that Nene was the Knight Saber she
hurt?


: *****************************************************************
: Stormwalker <stormwalker@airmail.net> proudly presents...
: 
:                       Bubblegum Collision 
:                                 
:        A Bubblegum Crisis fanfiction by Douglas A. Reeves
: *****************************************************************
: 
: Part Four - The Enemy of My Enemy

... need not be my friend, as an old misconception would have us
believe.  But it *can* happen.  :)


: The size of the disc
: magazine was reduced f rom thirty to fifteen, but otherwise the
: weapons remained unchanged.

"From"


: The largest adjustment was the loss of the
: full flight capabilities, but this would be solved when she
: received her motorslave.

"Motoslave", I think.


:      As she left the room, Sylia realized something.  Finally,
: she had faced her own pain, and beaten it, by helping another
: with hers.  Each of her Knight Sabers--and they really were
: "hers"--needed her, and she was determined to be there for them. 
: That was the new life she had made for herself.

<sigh>  Wonderful.


:      Christine frowned.  "I've been there... I hope she comes out
: if it better."

"out of it"


Great stuff!


Sebastian
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