The response to Richard Lawson follows such:

Excellent work.

	Thank you.  I aim to please. :P

Are you going to explain Ryoga/Ukyo?  IMO there is no justification for
that kind of relationship in the manga, so I'd like to see an attempt at
one in this story.

	That's the iffy part.  It all started in part 4, where Ukyo just
felt something wrong when Nabiki and Ryoga came in.  I have to get them
together... why?  Reasons to be told.
	But how to make it feasible (hopefully, without using any of the
herbs and spices I keep hinting at), will be a trick I'll have to see if
I could pull.
	How about that Nabiki angle, though?

Mind you, Ryoga waking up in Ukyo's bed and his reactions to that were
just classic - very funny, and very much in the Takahashi style.  That
was my favorite part of the fic.

	The flavor, I suppose, is the one element I try to retain up to a 
large extent.

Also liked the Nodoka paragraph.

	Made sense to me.  ^_^

Interested to see where you're going with this.

	So am I.  I'm just about as sure as the third day, but after that...

	Thanks.  I'm glad to see that I'm still being read.  


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