Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF][R1/2][LEMON]Ukyou: Warped Reflections
From: Mike Noakes
Date: 4/23/1997, 2:45 PM
To: Mills&Willmore <4cw6@qlink.queensu.ca>
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com


	Heh.
	Dedicated to Zen indeed - I'm sure he'll love it.

	Aside for that - poor, poor Ukyou.  Guess she's just not destined 
to get Ranma in any possible world.  Some rather grim alternates, too - 
necrophiliac-Ukyou?  Ugh.  Shampoo and Ukyou was an... interesting 
scenario (though Ukyou seemed to be, ah, dripping all over the place - 
and I kept expecting Shampoo to turn the cooking lesson into something 
grimmer and suddenly start chopping Ukyou up or something...)
	Some off the mini-stories seemed familiar, though.  Like the 
Akane-Ukyou one - didn't SKJAM do that in his Deep Reflections 'fic?  But 
I gather that was the point, what with the sequence of one-line 
possibilities that seemed reminiscent of Ukyou-fics I couldn't quite place.
	The ending was excellent - the part where's she's losing it in 
the hall of mirrors and starts smashing everything up.  The return home, 
and the panty-buried experienced-Ukyou trying to stop her predecesor was 
a nice touch.
	The self-insertion element seemed totally unecessary, though.  It 
just, I dunno, didn't seem to match the feel of teh rest of the story.
	Aside from that - well written, interesting story.  I gather you 
guys aren't exactly for an Ukyou-Ranma pairing...

	Later!
	-Mike