On Mon, 21 Apr 1997, Mark Doherty wrote:

At 09:46 PM 18/04/97 -0400, H. Torrance Griffin wrote:

	Zen's gonna _hate_ this one....

Well, as one of the 'Ukyou' people out there, let me say that I can
forgive your portrayal of Ukyou... if and only if you offer her some 
redemption later on. I'm not talking about matching her up to some 
guy, that is secondary to her getting forgiveness. If she gets her 

I'm glad to see you can forgive.  It's a good trait.
In this case I think the characterisation of Ukyo is perfectly fine, she
just happened to end up doing the wrong thing at the wrong time.  With
how her other plans backfire so badly it's isn't unexpected.

redemption, I'll be ok with it...(OOOooooo I hate it when Ukyou feels
miserable for something she did in a fic! That isn't a flame, BTW, just
me venting.)

Yeah, and I hate it when Shampoo ends up with Mousse.  OOOOOOoooooo.
So far, at the very best I've said "Errr, ummm, okay" and at the worst,
well, "DIE MOUSSE!!!!  DIE A THOUSANDS, NO TEN THOUSAND DEATHS!!!!!"
and more often than not, like 99% of the time it's the latter.
Gladly this story isn't one of those.

So, since I want to see Ukyou back in good spirits, hurry up and write 
more. Well, what are you waiting for? Hurry up! Hurry up! ^_^

He's going, he's going.  Give him time.

Wade