On Tue, 22 Apr 1997, Anthony Woo wrote:

I just read The Party and I thought it was great.  It seemed real (as far
as anime gets real) you know what I mean.  It dealt with real problems and
there were no easy solutions.  I'm looking forward to the rest of it.

	As I've said before, me too.

I think you should drop the scene where Ryoga gets hit by the bottle cap.
It detracts from the mood of the story, takes us away from the action.
Besides Ryoga isn't that stupid.  He wouldn't blame something like a
bottle cap out of nowhere on Ranma.  Besides you don't really need an
excuse for Ryoga to go after Ranma.

	No, no!  Leave it in.  It's perfect, a small gem.  And, oh yes 
he would.

S h a z o r n				No, I'm not an otaku!
<rayburn@cc.umanitoba.ca>		But I'm working on it... ^_^;