At 09:46 PM 18/04/97 -0400, H. Torrance Griffin wrote:

	Zen's gonna _hate_ this one....

Well, as one of the 'Ukyou' people out there, let me say that I can
forgive your portrayal of Ukyou... if and only if you offer her some 
redemption later on. I'm not talking about matching her up to some 
guy, that is secondary to her getting forgiveness. If she gets her 
redemption, I'll be ok with it...(OOOooooo I hate it when Ukyou feels
miserable for something she did in a fic! That isn't a flame, BTW, just
me venting.)

So, since I want to see Ukyou back in good spirits, hurry up and write 
more. Well, what are you waiting for? Hurry up! Hurry up! ^_^

	I personally like it, but I admit I was going to blow up at you
about Cologne until I read the epilogue (a stunt like that to force 'Poo
to mature into leadership is exactly her style, as low as anything on the
surface but planned out for the best).

Mmm, yes. I agree with the Cologne bit.

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