Excellent work.

Are you going to explain Ryoga/Ukyo?  IMO there is no justification for
that kind of relationship in the manga, so I'd like to see an attempt at
one in this story.

Mind you, Ryoga waking up in Ukyo's bed and his reactions to that were
just classic - very funny, and very much in the Takahashi style.  That
was my favorite part of the fic.

Also liked the Nodoka paragraph.

Interested to see where you're going with this.

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