On Fri, 18 Apr 1997 15:29:01 +0000, Terence Fergusson wrote:
Bloody 'ell. Now, that was a very, very good fic.
Thank you!
I really liked the original, and I'd been silently hoping that someone would
continue it.
I really, really, really wanna see more.
I'll try to send part 4 to the list tonight. The conclusion is still being
written, so it'll take a little longer.
Ryouga seems to be the most adjusted at this stage. My only criticism is
basically me wondering why that could be. Mind explaining?
Ryoga, or rather P-chan, is devoted to Akane. She's the one who took him in and
gave him a home, who feeds him, etc. He doesn't at all like being in his human
form, but he'll do it because that's the way he can protect Akane.
Other than that, a nice idea on how to continue it. Now let's see you finish
it.
I'm working on it!
Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
My fanfics and the FFML map are on my comics/manga page,
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics