Not bad.  Ranma played it a little too cool (if he found out ahead of time,
why didn't he say something then)  but an oveall nice fic.  Almost thought
you were going to get lemony there, but luckily she caught him.
One thing though, if this is in the usual Ranma time continuim, how did this
occur?

	"Naughty Akane," he whispered, "alone with a pervert like me
and not wearing a bra!" He raised his head, bringing their lips 
together in a deep, passionate kiss.  Slowly his right hand slid from
her breast to her back, bringing them chest to chest. As his grip
tightened and he rolled them onto their side, Akane moved her hands

>from his shoulders, to bury then in her love's hair.

	"Ranma...."

Did Ranma already "hook up" with Akane?  If not, how come the sudden
interest, he did see her naked before.

Ok, I give up.  Henry J. Cobb and others, wait for the sequel, I'll 
answer your questions there.

You got a sequel planned on this?  Probably all the bad reactions to be had
by the characters.  Soun crying cause his baby has been deflowered, Ukyo and
Shampoo's reactions. Kodachi's attempts on the child's life.  And all types
of nasty thigs that can result be them having a kid.

                                                                Josh