Ranma turns to Akane.  "Look, I'm sorry, Akane?  It's just that

their >family and you know how I feel when family is involved."

Hmmm...might want to change that (?) to something like (...)

They're family...not their


<snip>

    Serena taps her head as she concentrates.  "Its supposed to be

a rare >form of martial arts, I just can't remember what though.
He's capable to >win any fight he's gotten into, or so I've heard."

    Lita defiantly looks interested

Definitely...defiantly is a completely different word.

He's capable to win any fight?  This doesn't sound right?
He has won every fight he's gotten into...
He is capable of winning every fight...


<snip>

    Akane elbows him in the gut.  "Can we go some wear to talk in
private?  I believe that there are some things that you need to know

about >him but it's a little private."

Somewhere, instead of `some wear`

    "Well, you are radiating a cursed karma.  It seems connected to

you

chi." replies Grandpa.
    "I guess I should tell you about myself and what I've been

through."  >Ranma takes a deep breath and proceeds to tell them when
he left home a the >age of 5, meeting Ukyuo at the age of 6, training
in Cat-fu at 10, his fatal >trip to Jyusenkyo at 16, meeting

seems to be connected to you chi.  Your chi?
<snip>

    "What are you two doing here? This is defiantly strange." said

Rei.

<snip>
Deifiantly again...

    "`Tiss done." was Pluto's only reply.

Tis done

<snip>

 "Ouch what hit me?" groaned Ranma as he sat-up and looked around.

Nix that hyphen there, he's not doing exercises.

Shouldn't there be a comma after "Ouch,?


Whee, I havn't even read the story yet, just C&C'in some C&C..
Is this how it's supposed to work?

Warr

In 525 B.C., the Persians whipped the Egyptian Army. A cunning Persian
officer lined up a row of cats in front of his troops. The Egyptians
soldiers thought the cats were sacred. They wouldn't fire off any arrows.
But the Persians would. They killed just about everything in front of them
except the cats.

Your body, if typical, makes about an ounce of alcohol a day. Remarkable.
Almost enough.

Blood, it's said, is the most nutritious of all foods.  It's long been in
demand in China. Northern Europeans brought it over, too. In sausage
mostly. That and head cheese are still in the good delis. As a lad on the
farm, I had opportunities to decline both. You don't see many blood foods
in neighborhood markets anymore.