Subject: Re: [FFML] [fic][Ranma] Pools of Horror, Part 1 of 5
From: "Jorge A. Pratt" <al709382@mordor.ccm.itesm.mx>
Date: 4/18/1997, 8:05 PM
To: Gary Kleppe
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com



On Wed, 16 Apr 1997, Gary Kleppe wrote:


			PART ONE: LILI'S STORY

Wasn't Split Personalities' sidestory named like this?

Feng Lili moved through the woods, as quickly as she could, looking for
  ^^^^
Phoenix?

She noticed her clothes. This wasn't something a girl like her could
wear! Then she noticed herself. There was no more thin and scrawny young
girl. She was strong, muscular, and full-chested. How?

Umm, maybe she bloomed real fast?

Clothes. She would need clothes. She searched for something suitable.
The closet was full of things a boy might wear. In the very back was a
dress. It would have to do. It was nothing like what she was used to,
but at least it somehow felt feminine. At least wearing it didn't make
her feel like she was wearing boy's clothes. Underneath she still had on
what she had been sleeping in, but that couldn't be helped for now.

Question: If Lili was born circa 470 AD, how did she recognize the
different types of clothing? Did men already wear trousers in China by
then?

The young man jumped into the shopping mall's decorative fountain. The
urges were too strong to resist. He rose, transformed into a
multi-tentacled minotaur-like creature. At that moment Pantyhose Taro
was no more.

-This- was a character that hadn't been considered... Then what'll happen
to Lukkosai and Rouge? And Herb?


all. She purchased a set of underwear that felt properly feminine to
her, using some monies that were in the bag she carried.

I understand that she could have figured out what the green bills and
coins were for, but how did she know how to pay for the items? She
couldn't speak, nor read the prices, could she?


It was him. It was Yang Wei.

KUNOU?!?!


It had not been a good day for Akane Tendo.

But it -was- her fault, though.

It was the day of her Trigonometry exam.

Well, that was the -teacher's- fault, then. ^_^

And looks like she hasn't even figured out what's going on...


Police officer Usugurai wasn't worried.

He'll have an appearance in a Ranma 'fic. He should -better- be worried.

Now Usugurai was worried.

A little late for that...

More on the next part later.

The Zephyr
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