Subject: Re: [FFML] Ranko's Life...Chapter One... Complete!
From: Hitomi Ichinohei
Date: 4/15/1997, 12:46 AM
To: Scott Jamison
CC: fanfic mailing list <fanfic@fanfic.com>

On Mon, 14 Apr 1997, Scott Jamison wrote:

	(sinister voice)  anything....?

Yep!

Fore shadowing....

A very good technique.  ^_^

Actually, I fore shadowed several plot elements for the future, if anyone
can see them.  ^_^

	Sure you would have...

Hey!

She's been raised as an girl who should not try and really hide her
emotions much, except in public.

	True, he was a bit angry at first, probably because of something
between him and his father, but it didn't appear to be his normal
attitude.  Besides, he was willing to teach her in the one profession that
	Ranko sure can misread a person...

Of course!

She wouldn't be fun otherwise.  ^_^

	Ranko spoke up slightly, "Mother.  It would not be fair to
Kaneda-kun if I don't help him.  He is the man I am betroth to, and that
typo: betrothed

No typo.

It's supposed to read that way.

Remember the number of language forms in Japanese.

Actually, Kaneda seems to have *encouraged* her by offering to teach her
the martial arts, and Nabiki hasn't seen them together since the cab.  
Or has she?

Nope!

But she has been going by his earlier attitude, and the fact that he was
fighting a girl in a dress.

heh.  Good ol' Nabiki...> 

Yep!

Kinder, but sharper, and a bit more annoying...

You're about to get to know each other just a little too well for this 
early in the relationship... 

You could say that...

	Not necessarily the best move, considering she's still naked...

Well, wait for the next episode.

The accusations, and the innuendo start...

Hitomi

Ichinohei Hitomi
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