One thing I notice in your fic: very few direct quotes.  The reader 
doesn't really get the impression that he/she is witnessing the events 
the way great pieces of fiction do.  The changing POV's don't help this 
at all.  One final point: I was suprised to find out that Ranma was 
actually Happosai's biological son/daughter.  His unwillingness to be 
called "Father" is the main reason that I believe he either kidnapped 
Ranma, or took him away through some form of coercion.  Beyond those two 
points, not too bad.  (The subject matter being addressed is not 
deserving of flames.  You deserve a lot of credit for writing about the 
issue of child abuse.)
							-M