Subject: Re: [FFML] [SF-R1/2] Bad idea?
From: "BEN" <ye951336@ubishops.ca>
Date: 4/11/1997, 10:17 AM
To: "Brendan O'Donnell" <brenda02@sprynet.com>
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

Hi there!

<Could've lasted 2-seconds if she were more aggresive... more 
like Akane, maybe... but then she wouldn't be as cute!>
	This part doesn't really seem plausable.  Ranma would be interested in 
the techinques she used, but he's the sort of guy who doesn't really look at a 
woman unless she's throwing herself at him, or he has known her a little while.

This is the kind of C&C I was hoping for... My answer? Ranma having 
witnessed the battle was just a throw-in I thought up at the end - 
could've been anyone. I just wanted my "clip" to establish what it might be like for a Street 
Fighter character to arrive in the Ranmaverse.
     In anycase, we've never really seen Ranma looking at girls, have 
we? That might also be an interesting area to explore - but I leave 
that to anyone else to write.

BEN
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