On Mon, 7 Apr 1997 21:51:49 -0700, you wrote:
This is just a quickie I whipped up... originally it was going to be
part 2 of a longer story, but I decided what the heck, I'd let it stand
on its own. C&C greatly appreciated... if you read this, please let me
know what you think.
I thought it was great! Characrter drama, comedy, romance... what more
could you ask for? Very well done. I would have liked to see the
Principal have some more interesting dialog (you got dat Kahuna talkin'
like some haole, yeah) but other than that, I wouldn't change anything.
Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
My fanfics and the FFML map are on my comics/manga page,
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics